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About the Writing_Sky July 26, 2006

Posted by esnowwalker in Uncategorized.
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1. The opening starts with the introduction of what the author is doing and gives readers a very interesting topic; Food. This opening can my attention.

2. I think that the writer wants to put emphsis on important information and key words. This underlining can help readers to understand the entire writing.

3. Martine Yan seems to be a volunteer for this Project Open Hand. Because he is one of volunteers, he can appeal to the readers and pursuade them to take part in this Project. If the readers read a letter from the director of the organization, they are not willing to have interest in the project. This is the way normal campagne do to attract common people.

4. The writer gives some food facts related to the situation of the people with AIDS. By using these facts, the writer tries to show the readers how serious the situation.

5. The purpose of this shopping list is to show the readers what the organization is doing for the people with AIDS and how much food it needs for a week.  

6. This contribution form contains a very simple but powerful motto,”Your donation=Food=Strenth, Sustenance & Love for People with AIDS.” Also it contains a good information for donators that donation is tax-deductible.

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