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Hideki, about the writing 0724 July 25, 2006

Posted by esnowwalker in Uncategorized.
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1. The first paragraph is something like a small talk, and it smoothly catches my attention without any difficulty.

2. I think the reason that the author used anderlining is to emphasize what the author really want to tell readers.

3. Martin Yan may have more influence for people to give their cooperation to Project Open Hand than just a director of the organization has. So, I think the letter has come from Martin Yan.

4. The author wrote FACT#1 to #4 in this article. These FACTS helps me to understand what will happen when I give some donations.

5. For me, the purpose of the “shopping list” seems to catch more readers’ attention.

6. The contribution form has a kind of format. People do not have to write so much other than name and their address. So, it helps people to make donations without extra effort.

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